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Re: Students
Your poem was vvaarryyy strange. Are only men lazy? Please fix your ending. This one doesn't fit. This was a strange poem.
Feb 5, 2007 -
Re: I'm On My Own Now
I liked your song, but the theme wasn't...expanded on. It seemed like you were stuck.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: As the Sun Rises
Your poem didn't really have any dimension. It reads like a flat surface, with nothing for the mind to grab. I did like how it wasn't dark or depressing, though.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Messages and Bottles
I liked your poem, but the subject wasn't really clear.
Feb 4, 2007